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Matiafis
I want save the world When I began my formation, I thought of helping weakened people. but reality is not like utopia. In reality, I do to pay attention not to crease the hierarchy, to go in the quite right path. If I don't want respect the rules of institution, I pay it expansive. Also I think I can't save people, to bring to fit, if our gouvernment don't change. I have the impression that my work is only powder with the eyes, but that we do not have the means at our disposal to be effective. I'm a welfare worker.

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I want to save the world

When I began my formation(?), I thought of about helping weakened(?) people.
But reality is not like a utopia. In reality, I do to pay attention not to I try to ensure (that) I don't crease the hierarchy(?), to and that I go in down the quite right path. If I don't want respect the rules of institution, I pay it expansive(?).
Also, I don't think I can't can save people, to bring to fit(?), if our government don't doesn't change. I have the impression that my work is only powder with the eyes(?), but that we do not have the means at our disposal to be effective.
I'm a welfare worker.

It's a good attempt and I understand the general meaning, but some of your words aren't quite right. I'll offer some suggestions though where I can. These words may not express what you meant though, ok?

formation - work? ; weakened - worse-off? ; crease the hierarchy - "rattle any cages" (English idiom) ; expansive - (I think you meant "expensive," but you can just say "I pay for it" or "I pay the price" [idiom]) ; fit - health ; powder in the eyes (is this a French idiom?) - underappreciated.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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thank you very much !
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I had an attempt. Don't try to understand all the corrections at once. Just learn what you can from it and keep trying. You'll improve over time :)
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It's not boring at all! Some of the words you've used are a little confusing though, which is maybe why some people haven't tried to correct the grammar. I'll have a go though :)
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wow, nobody want correct me :( it's so boring ?

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