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So boring the day i thought my lovely summer holidays start,but it didn't.i arrived my hometown yesterday,it's not so great like i thought,and i have no friends here because i moved chongqing when i was very young:(,and no computer in my home,gosh,what should i do.
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So boring the day The day is so boring (one possible expression)

I thought my lovely summer holidays just started, but it didn't. I arrived in my hometown yesterday, it's not so great like I thought and I have no friends here because I moved to chongqing when I was very young:( and there's no computer in my home, gosh, what should I do.

Watch out for prepositions(介詞). Also, sometimes we add certain adverbs and adjectives in front of words to convey a clearer meaning of what we want to say. 

Hopefully I can get my 中文 skills up so you can correct me next time.
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hola soy de Mexico y creo q podriamos ayudarnos entre los 2, madame un mesage si te parece
٣ سبتمبر ٢٠١٥
Build a time machine. Read a book. Create a work of art.
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هل تريد التطور بشكل أسرع؟
انضم لمجتمع التعلّم هذا وجرّب التمرينات المجانية!