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I Want to Go Bike Riding I like going bike riding these days.Yesterday and the day before yesterday I spent about twenty minute to ride a bicycle along the road,I have never rided bike since I worked later.The feeling was so happy when I rided on a bicycle. I told myself I must stick to ride,becuase it keeps me fit,it is a sport When I rided on a bicycle I sang,I could see streetlights and pedestrians and cars
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I Want to Go Bike Riding

I like going bike riding these days.Yesterday and the day before yesterday I spent about twenty minutes to ride a bicycle along the road,I have never rided1 ( the past tense form of ride is rode) rode a bike since I worked later (no need for you to add/use the word later its already understood that it is past) The feeling was so happy when I rided on a rode a bicycle.

I told myself I must stick to ride I must ride regularly,becuase because it keeps me fit, it is a sport 2 (you could also write it this way "because it is a sport that keeps me fit")

When I rided on a bicycle I sang 3 ( this phrase can also be written this way "every time I ride a bicycle I sing) ,4 I could see streetlights and,  pedestrians and cars.

Explanations:

1. There are verbs that you cant add ed to make it past tense please try to check that out on your English Grammar Book if you dont have any you can check that online

2. You can combine your idea into 1 sentence.

3. If your action is habitual like the example above, try using every time or regularly.

4. Use a comma to enumerate things or string of activities and on the last item use the word "and".


 

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