Next time, send me the link to your essay if you wish for my correction in an email.  Also you must know that you must capitalize all your "i"s as "I" when referring to youself.  See how Renee does it.  To show your seriousness in your learning of the English language, correct these first.  I have been correcting this common mistake for a long while now.  Usually it is a waste of my time as I never hear back from these "students".  Or when you write another new entry, send me the link and make sure you have learnt this lesson well first.  I will not correct any more such essays when I have given them my advice and it is not being followed.

TODAY

Today i was very busy because i was shoping at market in Lahore and i was surprised due to high prices of pent and shirts but i bought a nice pent and shirt in few rupee. i know you wana why i bought a new pent an shirt today because i'm going India soon....

TODAY

Today I was very busy because I went shopping at a market in Lahore. I was surprised due to high price of pants and shirts. I bought a nice pair of pants and a shirt for a few rupees. I know you wonder why I bought new clothing today. I am going to India soon.

TODAY

Today I was very busy because I was shopping at the market in Lahore. I was surprised due to the high prices of pants and shirts, but I bought a nice pair of pants and a shirt in a few ?RUPEE?. I know that you want to know why I bought a new pair of pants and shirt today. It is because I am going to India soon....

You cannot make your sentences too long. They become grammatically incorrect, in other words "run-on" sentences. Spread out what you are saying by including commas (,), transition words, or periods (.)