Zach W
明天是我弟弟的生日宴会!| Tomorrow is My Brother's Birthday Party! English |英语 Hello again! So, tomorrow's going to be my brother's birthday party. I think it will be...fun? He's going to be 8 years old! My mom invited about 50 people to come to the party. Too many children. I don't really like children... Oh, I got back from China on Tuesday of this week! China was amazing in many ways. I loved the people (they were very nice) and I love the culture. Chinese food (not American Chinese food) is very good! We got to eat authentic farmers' food. It was home-made. :D I wish I could go back soon. I would really like to return there... Until next time! Chinese | 汉语 你们好! 明天是我弟弟的生日宴会。我觉得宴会很乐趣。这年我弟弟八岁。妈妈邀请很多人(五十个)来了!孩子太多了。。。我不喜欢孩子! 星期二我回美国来。中国太好了!中国人和中国的文化很好。很喜欢。。。中国菜(不是美国的中国菜)很好吃。我们去了农民的家吃饭。很好。很好。 我想回去。 再见! ~吴智书
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对于这么小的年龄的人来说,你的汉语已经说的很好了。 继续努力!
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明天是我弟弟的生日宴会!| Tomorrow is My Brother's Birthday Party!

English |英语
Hello again!
So, tomorrow's going to be my brother's birthday party. I think it will be...fun? He's going to be 8 years old! My mom invited about 50 people to come to the party. Too many children. I don't really like children...

Oh, I got back from China on Tuesday of this week! China was amazing in many ways. I loved the people (they were very nice) and I love the culture. Chinese food (not American Chinese food) is very good! We got to eat authentic farmers' food. It was home-made. :D

I wish I could go back soon. I would really like to return there...

Until next time!

Chinese | 汉语
你们好!
明天<strike>是</strike>(有)我弟弟的生日宴会。我觉得宴会(会)<strike>乐(有)</strike>趣。<strike></strike>(今)年我弟弟八岁。妈妈邀请很多人(五十个)来了(大约50个人来参加这场聚会)!孩子太多了……我不是很喜欢)喜欢孩子!
星期二我回(到)美国<strike>来</strike>。中国太好了!<strike>中国人和中国的文化很好。很喜欢</strike>(我很喜欢友好的中国人和中国的文化。。。中国菜(不是美国的中国菜)很好吃。我们去了农民的家吃饭?。很好。很好。
<strike>我想回去</strike>(我想马上在回去)。
再见!
~吴智书
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明天是我弟弟的生日宴会!| Tomorrow is My Brother's Birthday Party!

English |英语
Hello again!
So, tomorrow's going to be my brother's birthday party. I think it will be...fun? He's going to be 8 years old! My mom invited about 50 people to come to the party. Too many children. I don't really like children...

Oh, I got back from China on Tuesday of this week! China was amazing in many ways. I loved the people (they were very nice) and I love the culture. Chinese food (not American Chinese food) is very good! We got to eat authentic farmers' food. It was home-made. :D

I wish I could go back soon. I would really like to return there...

Until next time!

Chinese | 汉语
你们好!
明天是我弟弟的生日宴会。我觉得宴会很有乐趣。这年我弟弟八岁。妈妈邀请很多人(五十个)来了!孩子太多了。。。我不喜欢孩子!
星期二我回美国。中国太好了!中国人和中国的文化很好。很喜欢。。。中国菜(不是美国的中国菜)很好吃。我们去了农民的家吃饭。很好。很好。
我想回去。
再见!
~吴智书
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明天<font color="#ff0000">有</font>我弟弟的生日宴会!| Tomorrow is My Brother's Birthday Party!

English |英语
Hello again!
So, tomorrow's going to be my brother's birthday party. I think it will be...fun? He's going to be 8 years old! My mom invited about 50 people to come to the party. Too many children. I don't really like children...

Oh, I got back from China on Tuesday of this week! China was amazing in many ways. I loved the people (they were very nice) and I love the culture. Chinese food (not American Chinese food) is very good! We got to eat authentic farmers' food. It was home-made. :D

I wish I could go back soon. I would really like to return there...

Until next time!

Chinese | 汉语
你们好!
明天我弟弟的生日宴会。我觉得宴会很趣。我弟弟年八岁。妈妈邀请很多人(五十个)<strike>来了</strike>!孩子太多了我不喜欢孩子!
星期二我回美国。中国太好了!中国人和中国<strike>的</strike>文化很好,我很喜欢。<strike>。。</strike>中国菜(不是美国的中国菜)很好吃。我们去了农<strike>民的</strike>家吃饭。很好。很好。
我想<strike>回</strike>去。
再见!
~吴智书
١٥ أغسطس ٢٠١٠

明天是我弟弟的生日<strike>宴会</strike>聚会(聚会要好些,感觉宴会是公司国家的那种。。。)!| Tomorrow is My Brother's Birthday Party!

English |英语
Hello again!
So, tomorrow's going to be my brother's birthday party. I think it will be...fun? He's going to be 8 years old! My mom invited about 50 people to come to the party. Too many children. I don't really like children...

Oh, I got back from China on Tuesday of this week! China was amazing in many ways. I loved the people (they were very nice) and I love the culture. Chinese food (not American Chinese food) is very good! We got to eat authentic farmers' food. It was home-made. :D

I wish I could go back soon. I would really like to return there...

Until next time!

Chinese | 汉语
你们好!
明天是我弟弟的生日<strike>宴会</strike>聚会。我觉得<strike>宴会</strike>聚会<strike>乐趣</strike>有趣<strike>这年</strike>今年我弟弟八岁。妈妈邀请很多人(五十个)来了!孩子太多了。。。我不喜欢孩子!
星期二我回美国来。中国太好了!中国人和中国的文化很好。很喜欢。。。中国菜(不是美国的中国菜)很好吃。我们去了农民的家吃饭(农家乐???)。很好。很好。
<strike>我想回去</strike>我希望我能早点去中国
再见!
~吴智书
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