George's notebook entry: Sep 15, 2010 Watashi wa kanjite me o samashita tsukare to byōki. Tachiagatte, furo ni haitta. Watashi no ha o migaita. Sonogo ryōri o. Isoide tabeta. Fuku o kita. Shigoto ni i

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George's notebook entry: Sep 15, 2010 Watashi wa kanjite me o samashita tsukare to byōki. Tachiagatte, furo ni haitta. Watashi no ha o migaita. Sonogo ryōri o. Isoide tabeta. Fuku o kita. Shigoto ni itta. Jimusho ni okurete kita. Jōshi wa okotte ita. Kare wa watashi o shisseki. Watashi ni kami o ataeta. Honkō de wa," to nobeta mō osoi" Watashi wa dōyō. Jōshi wa watashi o ataeru koto wa shōsan. Sono hi no nokori no watashi wa shigoto. Watashi wa ie ni kaeru tochū de chūshoku o tabeta. Watashi wa kuruma no jiko garējidoa ni unten ni haitta. Dono yōna hidoi hi. I awoke feeling tired and sick. got up and took bath. brushed my teeth. then prepared food. ate in a rush. got dressed. went to work. arrived to office late. the boss was angry. he reprimanded me. gave me a paper. paper said, "no more late" I upset. the boss never give me praise. i work for the rest of day. i ate lunch on the way home. I got into a car accident driving into garage door. what a terrible day.

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You did a good job, George-san. You could write an essay in Japanese, couldn't you? I think it's amazing! even though there are some expressions you should correct, Keep up studying Japanese!

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Romaji hurts my head.

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George's notebook entry: Sep 15, 2010

Watashi wa tsukare to taichou no warusa wo kanjite me wo samashita. Okiagatte furo ni hairi, <strike>Watashi no</strike> ha wo migaita. Sonoato isoide ryōri o <strike>Isoide</strike> tabeta. Fuku o kigaete, shigoto ni itta. Jimusho ni okurete tsuita. Jōshi wa okotte ita. Kare wa watashi o shissekishita. Watashi ni <strike>Honkō de wa</strike>(?) " <strike>to nobeta </strike>mō chikokusuruna" to kakareta kami wo watashita<strike>ataeta</strike>. Watashi wa dōyō shita. Jōshi wa watashi wo kesshite homenai. Watashi wa sono hi <strike>no</strike>ga <strike>nokori no</strike>owari made zutto hartaraitawatashi <strike>wa shigoto</strike>. Watashi wa ie ni kaeru tochū de chūshoku o tabeta. Watashi wa kuruma wo gare-ji ni butsukete simatta.<strike>no jiko garējidoa ni unten ni haitta</strike>. <strike>Dono yōna </strike>Nante hidoi hi da.
I awoke feeling tired and sick.
got up and took bath.
brushed my teeth.
then prepared food.
ate in a rush.
got dressed.
went to work.
arrived to office late.
the boss was angry.
he reprimanded me.
gave me a paper.
paper said, "no more late"
I upset.
the boss never give me praise.
i work for the rest of day.
i ate lunch on the way home.
I got into a car accident driving into garage door.
what a terrible day.

Not too bad.
Keep ot up^^

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