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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am glad to join the italki to study languages with you! There has been a long time since I learned the ABC of English ,but being limitted in the terrible condition,I have never talked with English speakers before. Maybe I will be very confused when you are talking to me by voice. But a genuine Chinese as I am ,I have many advantages.I live in a north county in China , where is very cold now, the ground has been covered with white ice since two months ago .If you are a friend living in tropical country ,welcome you to visit our ice world.Reading and watching movics is my favourite ,and the Three Kingdom written by ancient Chinese writer Luo Guanzhong is the one of my most interested in .Hugo is the forign writer I like best. Today is the frist day I come there , I hope the italki will be dear language learning friend!

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Oh! One more thing to note...while "ice world" is okay to say, a native speaker might say "winter wonderland" instead.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am glad I to joined the italki to study languages with you!
It There has been a long time since I learned the ABC's of English, but being terribly limited limitted in the terrible condition in my ability to speak English (Can you specify what terrible condition you are referring to? It would make it easier to edit this sentence. I just guessed what you were trying to say), I have never talked with English speakers before. Maybe I would will probably be very confused if you spoke to me in person when you are talking to me by voice. 

But as genuine a Chinese person as I am, I have many advantages. I live in a northern county in China, which where is very cold right now; (Are you sure you mean "county"? Perhaps you mean province?) the ground has been covered with white ice for since two months ago. (Do you mean white snow? Or really "white ice"?) If you are a friend living in a tropical country, you are welcome you to come visit our ice world.


Note about content: (I am a little confused as to why living in a cold, northern region of China is an advantage. What type of advantage do you have there? What benefit does it give you? Also, what does it have to do with you being a genuine Chinese person? In addition, you said "many advantages", but you only listed one. If you only have one advantage then it is better to say "I have one advantage" instead of "I have many advantages")

 

Reading and watching movies is my favourite thing to do, and the "Three Kingdoms" written by ancient Chinese writer, Luo Guanzhong, is the one of the movies my I am most interested in. Hugo is the foreign writer that I like best. (You can also say: "The foreign writer that I like the best is Hugo.") 

Today is my the first day I come on here; I hope the italki will be my dear language learning friend!

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