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vicky
lose my weight I want to lose some weights.I am only 45 kilos before,but now i get 49 kilos!Although its still thin since I am 1.65 meters,I still think its too fat for me! But I so much love desserts,how can i do... I need take some exercise everyday,and be on diet. must! Keep it going!In order to prepare the comingh of summer! yayyyyyyy
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٢٣ مايو ٢٠١٣

Losing weight

I want to lose some weightsBefore, I am was only 45 kilos before,but now I'm get 49 kilos!  Although I'm its still thin since I am 1.65 meters, I still think I'm too heavy! its too fat for me!
But I so much love desserts so much.   What can I do...
I need take to do some exercises everyday, and be on diet.  I must!
I must keep it going! in order to prepare for the comingh of summer!
Yayyyyyyy!



**I've actually lost 28 kilos over 2 years.  I think the important thing to remember is that you need to lose weight slowly.  Change your diet.  Exercise often.  But seeing as how you only need to lose 4 kilograms, I think you can do it within two months.  =)  You're not fighting your body when you're losing weight.  You're actually fighting your mind. 

٣ مايو ٢٠١٣

lose my weight 减肥只能说lose weight呢

I want to lose some weights.I am only 45 kilos before,but now i get 49 kilos!Although its still thin since I am 1.65 meters,I still think its too fat for me!
But I so much love desserts,how can i do...
I need take some exercise everyday,and be on diet. must!
Keep it going!In order to prepare the comingh of summer!
yayyyyyyy

٣ مايو ٢٠١٣

Losing weight

I want to lose some weight. I was only 45 kilos before, but now I weigh 49 kilos! Although I'm still thin, since I am 1.65 meters, but I still think it's too fat for me!
But I so much love desserts, how can I do it...
I need take some exercise everyday and be on a diet. I must!
Keep it going, in order to prepare the coming of summer!
yayyyyyyy

 

<em>[Good job.  "It's" = 'it is', "its" = possessive of it (like 'his' or 'hers').  Many native speakers make that same mistake.]</em>

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vicky
المهارات اللغوية
الصينية (المندرية), الصينية (الكانتونية), الإنجليزية, الإيطالية, الإسبانية
لغة التعلّم
الصينية (الكانتونية), الإنجليزية, الإيطالية, الإسبانية