Music :)

I like music and I think this it is the fuel for our souls. Unfortunately, my parents never let me learn how to play an instrument, although I insisted with some of them such as violin which sound is enjoyable I tried to convince them to let me play the violin, which has a pleasant sound. I know that it is not too late to learn, but I have already found a new passion. Even so, I do not reject the idea of studying some music.

I like to listen different kinds of music; every musical genre feels special in a special way. Nevertheless I love finding not mainstream bands who are excellent in at what they do and inspire positive feelings. Therefore, In my opinion, it is amazing to listen to lyrics with significance. Despite all this, I cannot consider myself as someone who has extensive knowledge about music.

Good work. I'm not sure if the clause I added to the second sentence is close in meaning to what you had in mind, so please disregard it if it's not.

Music :)

I like music and I think this it is the fuel for our souls. Unfortunately, my parents never let me learn how to play an instrument, although I [insisted with some of them such as violin which sound is enjoyable][begged them to play the violin]. I know that it is not too late to learn, but I have already found a new passion. Even so, I do not reject the idea of studying some music.

I like to listen to different kinds of music; every musical genre feels in a special way. Nevertheless, I love finding not mainstream bands which are not mainstream who that are excellent in what they do and that inspire possitive feelings. Therefore, in my opinion, it is amazing to listen to lyrics [with significance][that have significant meaning]. Despite all this, I cannot consider myself as someone who has extensive knowledge about music.

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