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Isabel
good afternoon everybody !! This morning to got light cloudy, windy and started to raining too, despite the fact that is spring, the weather is cold, I didn't feel like to go shopping to the market, so I started to do my housework and then I visited my italki account for a moment to chat with my news friends that I made in this nice web community. ;-)
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Good work!

 

Here are a few different ways you could put together this sentence.

This morning to got light cloudy, windy and started to raining too, despite the fact that is spring, the weather is cold,

 

It was windy, partially cloudy and rainy this morning. The weather remains chilly even though spring has begun.

 

Even though we are in the middle of spring, this morning not only was it cloudy and windy but it rained.

 

An American weatherman would say it like this

Good morning, you are waking up to partly cloudy skies. It is windy out there and even rained for a short time. The calendar says that it is springtime, but I tell you folks you sure wouldn't know it by the weather today.

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good afternoon everybody !!

This morning to got light it became (<em>or maybe "it turned cloudy"</em>), windy and started to raining too, despite the fact that it is spring, the weather is cold,I didn't feel like to going shopping to at the market, so I started to do my housework and then I visited my italki account for a moment to chat with my news friends that I made in this nice web community. ;-)

 

<em>[Isabel: Good work, but your use of the phrase "to got light" was difficult to understand. I'm not sure my suggested corrections actually have the spirit of what you intended to mean.  Meanwhile, I believe it helps my Spanish when I read what you and other native Spanish speakers write in English, as I get a chance to see how your mind instinctively creates sentences. There are so many subtle differences between the two languages.] </em>

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