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My dog Today I speak about my pets. My dog´s name is Ico. He is a beautiful dog, he love me. When someone is near me, he barks, because he is very jealous with me. He was 2 months when I came him at home. He seemed a little ball of cotton. Now he is 2 years old. But unfortunatelly he does not live with me, I see him once a month, I miss him a lot.
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My dog

Today I'm going to speak about my pets.
My dog´s name is Ico.
He is a beautiful dog and he loves me.
When someone is near me, he barks, because he is very jealous with protective of me.
He was 2 months old when I came brought him at home.
He seemed like a little ball of cotton.
Now he is 2 years old.
But unfortunatelly he does not live with me anymore and I (only) see him once a month. I miss him a lot.

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My dog

Today I'm going to talk about my pets.
My dog´s name is Ico.
He is a beautiful dog, he loves me.
When someone is near me, he barks because he is very protective of me.
He was 2 months old when I brought him at home.
He looked like a little ball of cotton.
Now he is 2 years old.
Unfortunatelly he does not live with me now, but I get to see him once a month, I miss him a lot.

 

I bet you miss him so much! I lost my dog 3 months ago. It's hard to be without your friend. 

*I tried to edit this a little differently from the first one because there are always many ways to say the same thing. Nice post!

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so cute!!!
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