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When i fell in love with english I was thirteen years old and i spent all the afternoon playing video games ... one day meanwhile i was playing i decided to listen to a cd and i put a cd that my mother bought few weeks before. It was the Queen greatest hits! At the first time i listend only to "we will rock you" and "we are the champions", after one day i tried to listen the other songs and step by step i fall in love with Queen's music, Freddie's voice and Brian's guitar! But there was a problem ... what were the singing? What was the meaning of their songs? I didn't know! So i started to study their lyrics and onwards i learnt a little bit of english! :)
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When I fell in love with English

I was thirteen years old and spent all the afternoon playing video games ... one day meanwhile while i was playing i decided to listen to a cd. and i put a cd that my mother bought few weeks before ago.
It was the Queen's greatest hits!
At the first time i listened only to "we will rock you" and "we are the champions", after one day i tried to listen the other songs and step by step slowly i fall in love with Queen's music, Freddie's voice and Brian's guitar!
But there was a problem ... what were they singing? What was the meaning of their songs? I didn't know!
So i started to study their lyrics and onwards i learnt a little bit of english! :)

 

Aside from capitalize the first letter of the sentence, you will also need to capitalize "I" and "English". I only corrected the first few "I" and "English". You get the drill :) 

 

٢٥ مايو ٢٠١٣
هل تريد التطور بشكل أسرع؟
انضم لمجتمع التعلّم هذا وجرّب التمرينات المجانية!

لا تفوّت فرصة تعلّم لغة جديدة وأنت مرتاح في منزلك. تصفّح مجموعتنا المختارة من مدرّسي اللغات ذوي الخبرة وسجّل في درسك الأول الآن!