my son's homework: use if... I would...

There are many places I would like to live. If I had a short holiday, I would live on a mountain [if you're saying "would," the verb "have" should agree with it, so you use "had"], just like my Grandparents do. I like to watch the fire and eat many delicious fruits [you can only use "many" with a countable noun, so you should use the countable "fruits" instead of the non-countable "fruit"]. If I had lots of money, I would go to other countries . I want to know about how they are different from China. I can see lots of beautiful scenery, too ["scenery" is non-countable, so you should say "lots of" or "much" instead of "many"]. I like that [if "them" refers to "scenery," it's wrong. "That" should be used for a non-countable noun].

my son's homework: use if... Iwould...

There are many places I would want to live. If I had a short holiday, I would live on a mountain, the same way that my Grandparents did. I like to watch fires and to eat many delicious fruits. If I had lots of money, I would go to visit other countries . I want to know about how people are different from China. I would like to see a lot of beautiful scenery. I would like that very much.

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Regards,

Theresa

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my son's homework: use if... Iwould...

There are many places I want to visit live. If I have a short holiday, I would live visit in a the mountains the same thing that like my Grandparents do. I like to watch the fire and eat many delicious fruits. If I have lots of money, I would go to other countries. I want to know about how they are they different from China. I can could see many a lot of beautiful scenery, too. I like them it.