HOMEWORK help me, please, my homework have errors, but can't find. Hello, My name is Susan. I'm fourteen and I live in Germany. My hobbys are going to discos, sometimes I listen to music in the ra

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HOMEWORK help me, please, my homework have errors, but can't find. Hello, My name is Susan. I'm fourteen and I live in Germany. My hobbys are going to discos, sometimes I listen to music in the radio. In x summer I go bathing in a lake. I haven't any brothers or sisters. We take busses to school. I visit year 9 at my school. My birthday is on Friday. I hope I will become a new guitar. I'm looking forward to get an e-mail from you. Yours, Susan

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HOMEWORK

Help me, please, my homework has errors, but I can't find them.

Hello,
My name is Susan. I'm fourteen and I live in Germany. My hobbies are going to discos and listening to music on the radio. In summer I go bathing in a lake. I haven't any brothers or sisters. We take busses to school. I am in year 9 at my school. My birthday is on Friday. I hope I will get a new guitar.
I'm looking forward to getting an e-mail from you.

Yours,
Susan

<em>[Good. You used 'become a new guitar' because the word for 'receive' in German is 'bekommen'. 'Become' in English translates to 'werden' or 'geworden' in German.]</em>

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susan left for school but she will stop by and pick me up

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HOMEWORK

Help me, please, my homework has errors, but can't find them.

Hello,
My name is Susan. I'm fourteen and I live in Germany. My hobbies are going to discos, sometimes I listen to music on the radio. In x summer I go bathing in a lake. I don't have any brothers or sisters. We take busses to school. I am in the ninth grade at my school. My birthday is on Friday. I hope I will get a new guitar.
I'm looking forward to get an e-mail from you.

Yours,
Susan

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opps - Hello, My name is Susan. I'm fourteen and I live in Germany. My hobby is going to discos, sometimes I listen to music on the radio. In summer I go bathing in a lake. I haven't any brothers or sisters. We take busses to school. I study in the seventh form. ?- (not sure, maybe the previous answer was correct). My birthday is on Friday. I hope I will get a new guitar. I'm looking forward to getting an e-mail from you

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Hello, My name is Susan. I'm fourteen and I live in Germany. My hobby is going to discos, sometimes I listen to music on the radio. In summer I go bathing in a lake. I haven't any brothers or sisters. We take busses to school. I study in the seventh form. ?- (not sure, maybe the previous answer was correct). My birthday is on Friday. I hope I will get a new guitar. And yes, of course the task itself.-->Totally agree with a guy below I'm looking forward to getting an e-mail from you.

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