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Asier
Comeptition. A lot of people are compiting every day with other people. I don´t understand why because isn´t necessary to be the best in the world at doing something, If you don´t get to be the best, it could be frustrating. Anyway i don´t mind this way of life , in my opinion i like to be my best version and improve myself everyday learning and doing new things like sports, cooking, knowledge, etc. I advice people don´t worry about others do, you must take care about your own actions and your interests. ;)
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Comeptition. Competition

A lot of people are compiting competing every day with other people. I don´t understand why because it isn´t necessary to be the best in the world at doing something, If you don´t get to be the best, it could can be frustrating. Anyway i don´t mind this way of life , in my opinion i I personally like to be my best version the best version of myself and improve myself everyday learning and doing new things like sports, cooking, knowledge, etc. I advice advise people, "don´t worry about others do, you must take care about your own actions and your interests." ;)

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Competition.

A lot of people are competing every day with other people.  I don´t understand why, because it isn´t necessary to be the best in the world at doing something.  If you don´t get to be the best, it could be frustrating. Anyway I don´t mind this way of life.  In my opinion I like to be my own best version and improve myself everyday learning and doing new things like participating in sports, cooking, personal knowledge etc...  I advise people don´t worry about what others do.  You must take care of your own actions and your own interests. ;)

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Comeptition.

A lot of people are competing every day with other people. I don´t understand why, because it isn't necessary to be the best in the world at doing something. If you don´t get to be the best, it could be frustrating. Anyway, I don´t mind this way of life  - in my opinion, I like to be my best version of myself and improve myself everyday learning and doing new things like sports, cooking, knowledge, etc. I advise people don´t worry about others do, you must take care of your own actions and your interests. ;)

 

<em>[Good English and a good thought.  Remember to capitalize 'I' as a pronoun.  'Advise' is the verb, 'advice' is the noun form of the concept.]</em>

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Asier, lo sé que el proceso de escribir en inglés no es fácil, pero diría que hiciste bien. Traté de ayudar con unos comentarios y espero que te ayuden. Have a good night, Byron
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