hardwork

When I was a child,I was told,"you must study hard ".Now,I begin to work,everyone around me say,"Only work hard can you earn money and make a live." So,I have to hurry up.

When I was a child, I was told " you must study hard." Now I have begun to work, everyone around me tells me " only if you work hard will you be able to earn money and make a life." So, I have to hurry up. 

Hardwork

When I was a child, I was told "you must study hard". Now, I begin that I've begun to work, everyone around me says "Only work by hard work can you earn money and make a living." So, I have to hurry up.

alternative:

When I was a child I was always told to "study hard", now that I've starting working I am always told to "work hard" so I can "make a living" ...I guess I better get on it!

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