Ghost Story

Hi! It's been a while since I wrote something here, but I wanted to tell you something good that happened in my school.

In my English class, the teacher told us that we needed to make teams because we were supposed to write a ghost story. So, my friends and I started to think about a topic that was would be interesting for our story. At In the end, we decided to make it about a girl and her boyfriend that moved to another town and their house was involved in a tragedy that happened a year before. Anyway, when my teacher read our story, she told me that I was a psycho but in a good way (I still don't understand how someone could be a good psycho) because she thought that a good writer should be a bit crazy to be able to make write good stories. Well, she finally told me that she loved my story and that she thinks that in the future I will be a writer. To tell you the truth, I felt really happy because that was my first time writing a story in English.

Thank you! :)

I've been correcting essays here on italki for a while now, and this is the most accurate piece of writing that I have had the pleasure of correcting. You should be very proud of yourself, your English is almost perfect. I'd love to read your ghost story as well! :P

Ghost Story

Hi!, It's been a while since I wrote something  anything here, but I wanted to tell you something good that happened in my school.

In my English class, the teacher told us tha we needed need to make teams because we were are supposed to write a ghost story. So, my friends and I started to think ( started thinking) about a topic that was would be interesting for our story. At the end, we decided to make it about a girl and her boyfriend that who moved to another town and their house was involved in a tragedy that happened a year before (ago). Anyway, when my teacher read our story, she told me that I was a psycho but in a good way( I still don't understand how someone could be a good psycho) because she thought that a good writer should be a bit crazy to make (to write or to create) good stories. Well, she finally told me that she loved my story and that (not required) she thinks that in the future I will be a writer. To tell you the truth the truth is I felt really happy because that it was my first time writing a story in English.

Thank you! :)

When someone said something to do something the order is written in present tenese but the sentence about the subject of the action is presented in past.

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