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A nice day
Hi guys!
I got up feeling very happy today. It was a nice day. This morning it was rainning (out). But after(it rained) (OR but later on, the sun...) the sun was shining. I don´t wasn't leaving home.
Later on, I lit a fire. My attention was caught by my computer and I was went on to learning some languages. I´m tired. Ohhhhh. It´s Monday tomorrow. I will have to go in to work for the evening. At In the morning i can go to buy from a shop,or take an order of coffe in some Café. Later,when I leave from work and I get at home,I´ll have a cup of tea to have (OR for inducing) sweet dreams.
What I´ll will I dream of (or about)? Who I´ll will I dream of (or about)? Who knows? The Life is beautiful. We use all live it.
Bye at to all. (OR ---Bye everyone!/Goodbye for now everyone!/ Bye-bye to everyone here!)
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My Comment:
I like this entry! It was very down-to-earth.(down-to-earth means very realistic and truthful)
Your not bad at English :) It was easy to understand what you wanted to say here. :)
A nice day
Hi guys!
I get up very happy today. It was is a nice day [el presente]. This morning it was rainning raining. But after later the sun was shining. I don´t didn't leaving home.
Later,I was light lit a fire. I was caught working on my computer and I was learning some languages. I´m tired. Ohhhhh. It´s Monday tomorrow.I will have will to go to my job,for that evening. At In the morning i can go to buy to shoping,or take have a coffe in some Café. Later,when I was leaved of my leave work and I get at home,I´ll have a cup of tea to have sweet dreams relax me.
What will I I´ll dream? Who will I I´ll dream of? Who knows? The life is beautiful. We use it.
Bye at all.
Bueno !
que soñaste de? diga me por favor :)
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