Essay

People face far greater risks in our modern way of life than they did in the past. How far do you agree or disagree with this statement?


Nowadays, in our world there are mach things, which can be danger for people. Some people can don’t know that it pose hazard to life, other look for risk especially for adrenalin. I am agree with this statement, because I think that now our world more dangerous than it was in the past.
Firstly, scientists almost every year are inventing new invention, which people want to try. For example, cars or airplanes. When we use airplane for move, we risk very much, because the plane does not came down safely in spite of this we risk for save our time. As for cars, it is also very risky carrier, because there are many people which don’t want to conform to the traffic rules.
Secondly, people risk for adrenalin. They like extreme sports such as parachute jumping, rock-climbing, bungee jumping and etc. Occupation such sports sometime is end badly, but it don’t stop people which who like to risk don't stop.
Finally, nowadays on TV we can see many advertising of different products, which it's  not always are useful and harmless. For instance, in our world many women are suffer obesity, and under the influence of advertising they buy medicine, which are injurious to their health.
In conclusion, I want to say that some people like to risk, others forced to risk for different reasons, for example they riskes because they want to save a time or money. But, I think, that in some occasion people must to risk, if we want interesting life. We must not afraid accidents and to live a full life.

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Essay

People face far greater risks in our modern way of life than they did in the past. How far do you agree or disagree whith with this statement?


Nowadays, in our world there are mach many things, which can be danger for to people. Some people can don’t know that it can pose hazard to life, while others look for risks, especially for adrenalin. I am agree with this statement, because I think that now our world more dangerous than it was in the past.
Firstly, scientists almost every year are inventing new inventions, which people want to try. For example, cars or airplanes. When we use an airplane for to move, we risk very much, because the plane does not came down safely. In spite of this we risk for save our time. As for cars, it is also very risky carrier, because there are many people which don’t want to conform to the traffic rules.
Secondly, people risk for adrenalin. They like extreme sports such as parachute jumping, rock-climbing, bungee jumping and etc. Occupation such sports sometimes is ends badly, but it don’t stop people which like to risk. but it doesn't stop people who like risks.
Finally, nowadays on TV we can see many advertising of different products, which that are not always are useful and harmless. For instance, in our world many women are suffer obesity, and under the influence of advertising they buy medicine, which are injurious to can be dangerous to their health.
In conclusion, I want to say that some people like to risks, while others are forced to risk for different reasons, for example save a time or money. But, I think, that in some occasion people must to risk, if we want interesting life. We must not afraid accidents and to live a full life.

You make some very good points in your essay and it was very interesting. I agree that it can sometimes be more dangerous to live now than it was in the past. Overall, this was well written! If you need more help, let me know!