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A Review of the Film 'Trainspotting' (Revision of)
'Trainspotting' is a film directed by Danny Boyle and based on Irvine Welsh's novel. It's definitely one of my favourite (favorite) films, for its special scottish style and outstanding shooting technique.
The film was about sex, drugs, betrayal and living decadently, (.) a bunch of people without morals. (spending their life in a decadent way.) Having experienced a series of incidents (accident), they finally make up their minds to conform to society. (change their lives into ordinary.) However, Mark is bored with their company and wants to break loose (them and doesn't want to play around with them again) so he steals (stoles) all their money to finance a (start his own) new life for himself. (in the end.)
The actors were very competent (distinguished), especially Ewan McGregor, my favourite (favorite) actor, as Mark and Johnny Lee Miller featuring Sick Boy. Young actors though they were, they grabbed the key to the characters and acted them out in their own way. One scene I remember (i remembered) most clearly was where Mark was in the toilet, trying to find his suppository in the stool, and then lost himself in the illusion after taking drugs.
In addition, the films (its) soundtracks added greatly to its success. (excellence to a great extent.) Plenty of rock songs were used in the film which add fuel to (foil) the atmosphere (a lot), especially Lou Reed's 'Perfect Day.'
The whole film was like a super rock star on stage such as Iggy Pop or David Bowie. It amazes (amazingly) and reflects (the really life that the) youth (youths) culture from (in) that generation, depicting (live and shows) a kind of rebellious spirit somewhat.
"Choose life. Choose a job. Choose a starter home. Choose dental insurance, leisure wear and matching luggage. Choose your future. But why would anyone want to do a thing like that?" as (it) questioned by Mark, the hero of the film, what are we really looking for in this blank, impetuous era? Why can't we just leave all the meaningless things aside and be what and whoever we want to be? We can simply just enjoy our lives and find a better utopian spiritual sustenance.
You writing is of an advanced standard and your sentence construction is impressive. I have suggested using a few different words/phrases to make it read more narural in a few places.
A Film Review of Trainspotting
Trainspotting is a film directed by Danny Boyle based on Irvine Welsh's novel. It's definitely one of my favorite films, for its special scottish style and outstanding shooting technique.
The film was about sex, drugs, betrayal and living decadently. A bunch of people spend their life in a decadent way. Having experienced a series of accident, they finally make up their mind to change their lives into ordinary. However Mark is bored with them and doesn't want to play around with them again so he stoles all their money to start his own new life in the end.
The actors were very distinguished, especially Ewan Mcgregor, my favorite actor, as Mark and Johnny Lee Miller featuring Sick Boy. Young actors though they were, they grabbed the key to the characters and acted them out in their own way. One scene i remembered most clearly was where Mark was in the toilet, trying to find his suppository in the stool, and then lost himself in the illusion after taking drugs.
In addition, its soundtracks added to its excellence to a great extent. Plenty of rock songs were used in the film which foil the atmosphere a lot, especially Lou Reed's Perfect Day.
The whole film was like a super rock star on stage such as Iggy Pop or David Bowie. It amazingly reflects the really life that the youths in that generation live and shows a kind of rebellious spirit somewhat.
"Choose life. Choose a job. Choose a starter home. Choose dental insurance, leisure wear and matching luggage. Choose your future. But why would anyone want to do a thing like that?"as it questioned by Mark, the hero of the film, what are we really looking for in this blank, impetuous era? Why can't we just leave all the meaningless things aside and be what whoever we want to be? We can simply just enjoy our lives and find a better utopian spiritual sustenance.
A Film Revision of Trainspotting
Trainspotting is a film directed by Danny Boyle based on Irvine Welsh's novel. It's definitely one of my favorite films, for its special scottish style and outstanding shooting technique.
The film was about sex, drugs, betrayal and living decadently. A bunch of people spend their life in a decadent way. Having experienced a series of accident, they finally make up their mind to change their lives into ordinary. However Mark is bored with them and doesn't want to play around with them any more so he stoles all their money to start his own new life in the end.
The actors were very distinguished, especially Ewan Mcgregor, my favorite actor, as Mark and Johnny Lee Miller featuring Sick Boy. Young actors though they were, they grabbed the key to the characters and acted them out in their own way. One scene i remembered most clearly was where Mark was in the toilet, trying to find his suppository in the stool, and then lost himself in the illusion after taking drugs.
In addition, its soundtracks added to its excellence to a great extent. Plenty of rock songs were used in the film which foil the atmosphere a lot, especially Lou Reed's Perfect Day.
The whole film was like a super rock star on stage such as Iggy Pop or David Bowie. It amazingly reflects the really life that the youths in that generation live and shows a kind of rebellious spirit somewhat.
"Choose life. Choose a job. Choose a starter home. Choose dental insurance, leisure wear and matching luggage. Choose your future. But why would anyone want to do a thing like that?"as it questioned by Mark, the hero of the film, what are we really looking for in this blank, impetuous era? Why can't we just leave all the meaningless things aside and be what whoever we want to be? We can simply just enjoy our lives and find a better utopian spiritual sustenance.
A Film Revision of Trainspotting
Trainspotting is a film directed by Danny Boyle based on Irvine Welsh's novel. It's definitely one of my favorite films, for its special scottish style and outstanding shooting technique.
The film was about sex, drugs, betrayal and living decadently. A bunch of people spend their life in a decadent way. Having experienced a series of accident, they finally make up their mind to change their lives into ordinary. However Mark is bored with them and doesn't want to play around with them again so he stoles all their money to start his own new life in the end.
The actors were very distinguished, especially Ewan Mcgregor, my favorite actor, as Mark and Johnny Lee Miller featuring Sick Boy. Young actors though they were, they grabbed the key to the characters and acted them out in their own way. One scene i remembered most clearly was where Mark was in the toilet, trying to find his suppository in the stool, and then lost himself in the illusion after taking drugs.
In addition, the film's soundtracks added to its excellence to a great extent. Plenty of rock songs were used in the film which foil the atmosphere a lot, especially Lou Reed's Perfect Day.
The whole film was like a super rock star on stage such as Iggy Pop or David Bowie. It amazingly reflects the really life that the youths in that generation live and shows a kind of rebellious spirit somewhat.
"Choose life. Choose a job. Choose a starter home. Choose dental insurance, leisure wear and matching luggage. Choose your future. But why would anyone want to do a thing like that?"as it questioned by Mark, the hero of the film, what are we really looking for in this blank, impetuous era? Why can't we just leave all the meaningless things aside and be what whoever we want to be? We can simply just enjoy our lives and find a better utopian spiritual sustenance.
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