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Self-introduction for BEC Vantage Test,Can you help improve it ?
Good afternoon, I am glad to be here, First ,let me briefly introduce myself. My name is Zengtefei, I come from Hunnang, I major in Chemical Engineering. However I like English Language as much as Chemistry. Fortunately, I have found my first job at HONDA due to my qualifications..
In my spare time, I enjoy music, sports, especially basketball, and studying the English language.
By and large, I am an easy-going person and I enjoy communicating with people. I like to make friends and in fact I have many friends. Besides, I am quite active and energetic. and I don’t like leaving things half done; When I have a project to do, I do it thoroughly and on time. In addition, I am organized; I have many duties when I am the Monitor, so I organize a schedule and prioritize my jobs. Finally I was awarded with the title of Outstanding League Member.
As for study, I'm a fast learner I didn't know anything about computers before attending a University. It was difficult at first but I studied hard, got high marks and can use it effectively now. I always believe that one can too easily lag behind unless one keeps on learning. In order to improve my English, I often go to English Corner to practice my oral English. I have passed College English Test, Band Six with high marks. Just like passing an exam, I believe that problems are really challenges and that I can solve them.
However, I know my English has room for improvement. I will continue studying for leisure. Thanks for your attention!
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Self-introduction for BEC Vantage Test,Can you help improve it ?
Good afternoon, I am glad to be here. First, let me briefly introduce myself. My name is Zengtefei and I come from Hunnang. I'm majoring in Chemical Engineering, however I like studying the English Language as much as studying Chemistry. Fortunately, because of my qualifications, I've landed my first job at HONDA.In my spare time, I enjoy music, sports (especially basketball) and studying the English language.
By and large, I am an easy-going person and I enjoy communicating with people. I like to make friends and in fact I have many friends. Besides, I am quite active and energetic. <strike>and</strike> I don’t like leaving things half done; When I have a project to do, I do it thoroughly and on time. In addition, I am organized; I have many duties when I am the Monitor, so I organize a schedule and prioritize jobs well. I was also awarded with the title of Outstanding League Member.
When it come to my studies, I'm a fast learner. I didn't know anything about computers before attending a University. It was difficult at first but I studied hard and got high marks and can use my computer skills very effectively now. I have always believed that unless a person continues to learn they can quickly lag behind the times. <strike> unless one keeps on learning</strike>.
In order to improve my English, I often go to The English Corner to practice spoken English. I have passed The College English Test, Band Six with high marks. Just like passing an exam, I believe that problems are really just challenges and <strike>that</strike> I can solve them, however, I know my English has room for improvement. I will continue studying English in my leisure time.(free time) <strike> </strike><strike>for leisure</strike>. Thanks for your attention!
You're welcome. ^^ Congratulations on you job with Honda! I drive a Honda. Ha ha.
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المهارات اللغوية
الصينية (المندرية), الإنجليزية
لغة التعلّم
الإنجليزية
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