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living and death Recently, i am always thinking about living and death. I am scared of death.Because i can't hear and i can't see at that time.However,i don't want to be a vampire.Because i don't want to losemy soul and temperature.

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Life and Death

Recently, I'm always thinking about living and dying (life and death).  I'm scared of death because I won't be able to hear or see when I'm dead.  can't hear and i can't see at that time.However I don't want to be a vampire because I don't want to lose my soul and  warm body temperature.



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We don’t usually use “recently” and "always ”together in the same sentence because they do  not have the same meaning.  Recently   就是  "'最近,” always 是   “总是.”

 

I would write it this way in 白话:

 

Recently I’ve been thinking a lot about life and death. I’m scared of dying.  I won’t be able to hear or see anything.  I don’t want to be a vampire!!  I don’t want to lose my soul and vitality (气) (or: body and soul -  这两个单词是常常共同用的。)

 

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life and death

Recently i have been  thinking about life and death. I am scared of dying because i won't be able to see or hear when i'm dead.However i don't want to be a vampire.Because i don't want to lose my soul and vitality.

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