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My feeling of military training. It's a special tradition for college freshman on the first term. In general,military training always proceed in summer,however,this time the training arranged in spring. We are so lucky that we avoid the hot sun and the high temperature. It's terrible to keep your body unmoved and stand under thesummer sun. You can't take a break until gain instructor allow. As a matter of fact,compared with training in summer,we were much easier. But in the begin,we complained the whole day,and blaming our instructor is too strict. now ,the training already finished, to be honest , I started to miss my instructor , when we have a rest, he would teach our song , play game with us ,tell the interesting story to us.Recall the day when we stay with him,our instructor took care of us like a brother. this period of military training, i felt exhausted after a day's training,hard training forced me have to go bed early,the rule demand me to get up early for routine exercise,on the one hand,i hate to get up early ,on the other hand, this strict rule help me to develop the healthy habit ;i felt happy when i played game with my friend,generally speaking,as a student we are busy with study ,we even are no able to chat with our classmates in a while,we just greet each other in a harry, this training created a good deal of chances let us acquaint with our classmates ;i felt sad when we had to say goodbye to our instructor,friends must parts. I won't forget this time was filled with laughter and tear forever,not only my physical qualities but also my spirit is improved thought this hard training. even if all good things come to an end,but i took many photos during this period of time, i want to record this meaningful and valuable experience. it will become one of the best memory in my campus life.

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Most of your mistakes are in punctuation. I had to make changes not because the sentence was incorrect but because your had contradictory statements one after the other. Example of contradictory statements: we complained the whole day,and blaming our instructor is too strict. now ,the training already finished, to be honest , I started to miss my instructor It's not logical to imply that the instructor was too strict but you will miss him. If you had wrote: (We complained the whole day, saying our instructor is too strict. But truthfully, I prefer that an instructor pushes me to be the best. I, for one, will miss him.)
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My feeling of military training.

It's a special tradition for college freshman on the first term.
In general,military training always proceed in summer,however,this time the training arranged in spring.
We are so lucky that we avoid the hot sun and the high temperature.
It's terrible to keep your body unmoved and stand under thesummer sun. You can't take a break until gain instructor allow.
As a matter of fact,compared with training in summer,we were much easier.
But in the begin,we complained the whole day,and blaming our instructor is too strict.
now ,the training already finished, to be honest , I started to miss my instructor , when we have a rest, he would teach our song , play game with us ,tell the interesting story to us.Recall the day when we stay with him,our instructor took care of us like a brother.
this period of military training, i felt exhausted after a day's training,hard training forced me have to go bed early,the rule demand me to get up early for routine exercise,on the one hand,i hate to get up early ,on the other hand, this strict rule help me to develop the healthy habit ;i felt happy when i played game with my friend,generally speaking,as a student we are busy with study ,we even are no able to chat with our classmates in a while,we just greet each other in a harry, this training created a good deal of chances let us acquaint with our classmates ;i felt sad when we had to say goodbye to our instructor,friends must parts.
I won't forget this time was filled with laughter and tear forever,not only my physical qualities but also my spirit is improved thought this hard training. even if all good things come to an end,but i took many photos during this period of time, i want to record this meaningful and valuable experience. it will become one of the best memory in my campus life.

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