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Informal essay This is my first compositin in the italki. To be honest , I think that I'm a coward . I know , my scentence is not grammatical and my spoken English is bad , so it scared me to think I will make mistakes ,but I want to change it ,and face it . I should practice writing and communicate with others . And I need to become a brave girl and I should share my life with others . I hope that I can improve my English through the italki.
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Informal essay

This is my first compositin in the italki. To be honest , I think that I'm a coward . I know , my scentence is not grammatical and my spoken English is bad , so it scared me to think I will make mistakes ,but I want to change it ,and face it . I should practice writing and communicate with others . And I need to become a brave girl and I should share my life with others . I hope that I can improve my English through the italki.

 

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Informal Essay

 

This is my first composition on italki. To be honest, I think that I'm a coward. I know my sentences are not grammatically correct and my spoken English is bad. It scares me that I will make mistakes, but I want to change and face this. I should practice writing and communicate with others. I need to become a brave girl so I could share my life with others. I hope that I can improve my English through italki.

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It's very good..there are some little mistakes, but overall easy to understand it. Keep it up!
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هل تريد التطور بشكل أسرع؟
انضم لمجتمع التعلّم هذا وجرّب التمرينات المجانية!