Kim
The variable weather 多变得气温 The weather is cold in morning and night and hot in noon. I not only wear a dust coat but also fit into a thinner clothes in my bag for the variable weather。 气温早晚凉中午热,出门的时候穿一件风衣,包里再带一件薄一点的衣服,以便应付这多变的天气。
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Correcting from your Chinese.  You will see the tone and nuances very differently expressed here.


气温早晚凉中午热,出门的时候穿一件风衣,包里再带一件薄一点的衣服,以便应付这多变的天气。

Cold in the mornings and nights but hot for the afternoons.  Hence when I go out, I wear a windbreaker.  Still, I carry some lighter clothes in my bag to cope with the uncanny weather.

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The variable Uncanny Weather 多变得气温

 

Correcting by not looking at your Chinese.

 

The weather It is cold in the mornings and at night and but hot in during afternoons. I not only wear a dust coat but also fit into a thinner clothes in my bag for the variable weatherIn my bag, I carry some lighter clothes so as to accomodate the uncanny weather.


气温早晚凉中午热,出门的时候穿一件风衣,包里再带一件薄一点的衣服,以便应付这多变的天气。

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谢谢Eric
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要注意身体呀
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多变的气温
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