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My Best friend I have the best friend. His name Mike. We are know each other from 7 years old. Mike was my neighbor when I lived in my parent's home (with my parents). We are grow up together. Mike is very positive man. He likes a bicycle riding and has two big travel on his bicycle. First travel was from St.Petersburg to Samara. I think it is a long distance. He rode 7 or 8 days.
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My Best friend

I have a best friend. His name Mike. We've know eachother since we were 7 years old. Mike was my neighbor when I lived in my parent's home (with my parents). We grew up together. Mike is a very positive man. He likes a bike riding and has taken two big trips <strike>trave</strike>l on his bicycle. His first trip  travel was from St.Petersburg to Samara. I think it's pretty far. He rode his bike for 7 or 8 days.

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My Best friend

I have a best friend. His name is Mike. We have  known each other since i was 7 years old. Mike was my neighbor when I lived in my parents' home (with my parents). We grew up together. Mike is <font color="#ff0000">a </font>very positive man. He likes bike riding and has taken two big trips on his bicycle. First travel was from St.Petersburg to Samara. I think it is a long distance. He rode his bike about 7 or 8 days.
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thank you!
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i want to congratulate, because you have a good friend, the frienship it's so important in the life
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My Best friend

I have a t<strike>he</strike> best friend. His name is Mike. We <strike>are know </strike>have known each other<strike> from</strike> since we were 7 years old. Mike was my neighbor when I lived in my parent's home (with my parents). We are grow grew up together. Mike is a very positive man. He likes <strike>a </strike>bicycle riding and <strike>has two big travel</strike> has taken two big trips on his bicycle. <strike>First travel</strike> His first trip was from St.Petersburg to Samara. I think it is a long distance. He rode 7 or 8 days.

That sounds like a cool trip!
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