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Today I don't feel like doing anything I don't feel good today.Don't know why.Maybe it's because of the stupid rain.It's been raining for almost 2 weeks and that sucks.I should have gone out to work out but i got trapped in home.And my study does not make any satisfactory progress.Soooooooooo frustrated!!! So i just play that song which can make me happy . 'Today I don't feel like doing anything...'----Lazy song by Bruno Mars
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Today I don't feel like doing anything

I don't feel good today. Don't know why. Maybe it's because of the stupid rain. It's been raining for almost 2 weeks and that sucks. I should have gone out to work out but I got trapped in at home. And my study studies does have not <em>been </em>make making any satisfactory (satisfactory really doesn't work here.  You would have to rewrite the sentence if you want to use it) progress. Soooooooooo frustrated!!! So I just play that song which can that makes me happy .
'Today I don't feel like doing anything...'----Lazy song by Bruno Mars

 

This is more of a correct way to write this.  Not bad!  Don't forget to space after every sentance. Also, you don't want to start a sentance with 'and' if you can help it.  Not really wrong, but it's not the best way to start a sentance.  :)

 

 

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Today I don't feel like doing anything

I dones't feel good today.Don't know why.Maybe it's because of the stupid rain.It's been raining for almost 2 weeks and that sucks.I should have gone out to work out, I became trapped at home. And my study does not make any satisfactory progress.So I am extremely frustrated!!! So I just play that song which can make me happy . 

'Today I don't feel like doing anything...'----Lazy song by Bruno Mars

 

I love Rain...

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هل تريد التطور بشكل أسرع؟
انضم لمجتمع التعلّم هذا وجرّب التمرينات المجانية!

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