Email for asking someone about to go to the cinema

Hi Daryl,
How are you? I´m very excited because this afternoon, I´m going to see the new film "Avatar" film. The first one was amazing, so I can´t wait to see this one the sequel! Would you like to come with me?
Is it ok at 5.00?

Kisses,

Just a few minor errors, well done! =)

email for ask someone about go to the cinema

Hi daryl,
How are you? I´m very excited because this afternoon I´m going to see the new film "Avatar". The first one was amazing so I can´t wait to see this one! Would you like to come with me?
Is it Ok at 5.00?
Kisses,

I had no idea a new Avatar movie was out !!! :-)