A piece of advice (a sinking story)
That was an odd meeting: my middle sister, her childhood sweetheart, my aunt Encarnita, and I, on a windy summer afternoon, borrowing the rickety van of my father and going for no reason to one of the most hostile beaches of the region...
http://carmencorrea.hatenablog.com/entry/2014/07/21/191943
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Hi Carmen,
Pretty much perfect! Nice one. I've been to a few beaches like that..horrible feeling!