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Learn English It’s my fisrt note. I’m learning english. I had some english lessons during my studies but I was a bad student. So my level is not good. Now I want travel and meet people around the world so I need to speak english. Gradually, I try to be better my english. I watch english movies and I listen english music as well as have a book of english lessons. For a week, I look for people to practice my oral language.
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It’s my fisrt note. *first

 

I’m learning english. *English

 

I had some english lessons during my studies but I was a bad student. So my level is not good. *English. (Also, this sentence needn't be two. Rather keep it as one, like this: I had some English lessons during my studies but I was a bad student so my level is not good.)

 

Now I want travel and meet people around the world so I need to speak english. *English (The names of languages are always capitilised because they are "proper nouns". It is the same with people's names, the names of countries, cities, etc.)

 

Gradually, I try to be better my english. *1: Gradually I am trying to improve my English.  2: Gradually I am trying to better my English.

 

I watch english movies and I listen english music as well as have a book of english lessons. *Here it would be better to make this sentence into 2 sentences, or use the present participle of have, "having". 1: I watch English movies and I listen to English music. I also have a book of English lessons.   2: I watch English movies and I listen to English music as well as having a book of English lessons.


For a week, I look for people to practice my oral language. *For a week I have been looking for people with whom to practice my oral language.

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Learning English

It’s my fisrt note. I’m learning English. I had some English lessons during my studies but I was a bad student. So my level is not good.
Now I want to travel and meet people from around the world so I need to speak English. I am trying to improve my English gradually. Gradually, I try to be better my english. I watch English movies and I listen to English songs. music as well as I also have a book of English lessons.
For a week, I have been looking for people with whom I can to practice my speaking.oral language .

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Learn English

It’s my fisrt first note.

I’m learning english.

I've had some english lessons at school/at english centres during my studies but I was a bad student. However, somethings were overlooked. So my level is not good. not as high as it would be.
Now I want to travel and meet people around the world so I need to speak english fluently/well. Gradually, I try to be better at my english. I watch english movies and I listen to english music as well as study english lessons in a book.
For a week, I look for people to practice english speaking with me.

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Hi June, your written English isn't bad, granted it needs some correcting which I have provided, but I understood everything you said very easily. If you lack the confidence to actually speak with a native speaker it will only take a short while to set you straight. I am new to italki and looking for students. I am very available so contact me if you would like to chat.
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Learn English

It’s my fisrt note.

I’m learning english.

I had some english lessons during my studies but I was a bad student. So my level is not good.
Now I want to travel and meet people around the world so I need to speak english. Gradually, I try to be better with my english. I watch english movies and I listen to english music as well as have a book of english lessons.
For a week, I has been looking for people to practice my oral language.

 

I am not a native English speaker either but I am kind of good at it. wish we can help each other and make progress together:)

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