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Hey everyone! I'm looking forward to practice my English here in order to be more fluent and confident when speaking and writing.
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<em>By using this website, </em>I'm looking forward <em>to improving my fluency and confidence </em><em>while speaking</em> and writing <em>in English. </em>

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Hey everyone!

I'm looking forward to practicing my English here in order to be more fluent and confident when speaking and writing.

 

I would also change "be" to "become" since it involves a process of change. 

 

Great job and welcome to italki!

 

Andrew

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Good lucky! Javier
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