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My lunch When I get up,it is 12 o'clock.My family went to their company,I had to cook myself.So I went to supermarket to buy the original material of food.I bought broccoli, pork and spinach. when I got home,I cooked them.I ate them and drunk the rose liquor.It was a good lunch.
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When I get got up,it is was (already) 12 o'clock. As my family went to their company, I had to cook by myself. So I went to the supermarket to buy the original material of ingredients for my meal. I bought broccoli, pork and spinach. When I got (back) home, I cooked them. I ate them and drunk drank the rose liquor. It was a good lunch.

 

Well written! 

I have made a few corrections to make the sentences more natural :)

 

١ أغسطس ٢٠١٤
هل تريد التطور بشكل أسرع؟
انضم لمجتمع التعلّم هذا وجرّب التمرينات المجانية!

لا تفوّت فرصة تعلّم لغة جديدة وأنت مرتاح في منزلك. تصفّح مجموعتنا المختارة من مدرّسي اللغات ذوي الخبرة وسجّل في درسك الأول الآن!