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Traveling Traveling Traveling gives people many advantages. The first advantage is relaxation. People who work busy and under pressure can find flexible and refresh again after trip. With a interesting travel, they come back with a lot of energy to work effectively. The second is that people acquire any of knowledge and skills from traveling. They learn histories and cultures of other places and other countries. In addition, the skills are also developed. People are not only experienced communication but also many soft skills as confident and independent. ( I do not know to write concluding sentence   )

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Traveling gives people many advantages. The first advantage is relaxation. People who are busy at work and under pressure can find flexibility  and refreshment  after a  trip. With an interesting travel, They can come back with a lot of energy to work effectively. The second advantage is that people acquire  some knowledge and skills from traveling. They learn history and cultures of other places and other countries. In addition, their skills are also developed. People are not only experienced at communication but also many soft skills as confidence and independence. This gives us a short yet helpful understanding of the advantages of traveling.

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