Sindy
My first poem in English :D LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL Friday seems to be the goal For the week, you can’t control. Summer is what we’re longing for, But use all the seasons to make sure, That your life is full of pleasure, Treat it like your biggest treasure. Be aware of life’s brevity! Take the chance to be just jolly! That’s the way you will experience Happiness with all its brilliance. Feel the rain, don’t just get wet! Life is anything but sad. You’re responsible for your own joy Now decide: to detest or to enjoy?
٢٧ أغسطس ٢٠١٤ ١٠:٣٧
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My first poem in English :D

LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL

Friday seems to be the goal
For the week, you can’t control.
Summer is what we’re longing for,
But use all the seasons to make sure,
That your life is full of pleasure,
Treat it like your biggest treasure.

Be aware of life’s brevity!
Take the chance to be just jolly!
That’s the way you will experience
Happiness with all its brilliance.

Feel the rain, don’t just get wet!
Life is anything but sad.
You’re responsible for your own joy
Now decide whether to detest or to enjoy!

 

<em>Great job!</em>

٢٧ أغسطس ٢٠١٤
Thank you, I really appreciate your words! :)
٥ فبراير ٢٠١٥
Better than what I see a lot of native American English speakers able to write.
٥ فبراير ٢٠١٥
Thank you so much :)
٢٨ أغسطس ٢٠١٤
Excellent Sindy!! I really like it, and you give very good advices as well !! Have a wondelful week :)
٢٨ أغسطس ٢٠١٤
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