Great job.. just a few minor corrections and improvements:

It's night right now

The first thing I learned in English Class was to say "Hello" and "Goodbye" and to introduce (you can use either the infinitive or the base form after "like," but you should be consistent in the same phrase) the myself (How do you say "Presentarme" in English? is the previous sentence correct? Yes, it is ) in a conversation.
I also learned to ask about personal information, like "What's your name?" or What's your phone number?".

I hope I have written something correctly In fact, you've written almost everything correctly.

Bye and good night