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feeling express (practice Who is the stranger that you are familiar with the most? What is the feeling of heart breaking? Have you ever thought of her in the dark night? Everyone have their past. But can you distinguish the past from the present? Or distinguish the girl from me? Ps. Just a practice, don't try to comfort me... :)
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Expressing Feelings express (practice)

Who is the stranger that with whom you are most familiar with the most?
What is the feeling of heart breaking? (unclear of complete idea)
Have you ever thought of her in the dark  at night?
Everyone have their has a past. (unclear of complete idea)
But can you distinguish the past from the present?
Or distinguish the that girl from me? (unclear of complete idea)

Ps. Just a practice, don't try to comfort me... :)

(This seems a bit like prose, which is a calculated form of English writing. If you meant it to be this way then fine otherwise you may wish to continue building up words to adapt a more natural sound. You are getting better in your writing. Keep up the good work.)

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