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The reason and winter
The reason why I joined this English speaking group is I need to improve my spoken English for my work. I am teaching English to young students in Hagwon but still I am not that confident with speaking English since I was worried about making mistakes . Also, there aren't many chances to practice English. It is quite stressful because I am not free of that even though I have to use English for teaching during classes. So I tried to meet foreign friends but found out I should study more grammar and sentences first and then I should practice. That might be more useful. So I had been eager to studying English at the time Cindy asked me to join this group so I just joined . I was looking for studing an English study group but speaking group,though (this sentence isn't correct, but I'm not sure exactly what you mean with "but" and "though"). After improving English I will keep studying and practicing.
*Do you like Winter?
Well I hated winter. Whenever winter came I was getting got more depressed than before.
That is because the sunlight is weaker.
And I get cold easily. I do not want to go out
When it is cold , feeling my skin painful my skin hurts.
I just want to be an animal which hibernates during winter.
I really like summer and summer sports.
When I think about white winter, a lot of snow on the street and filed piles of snow beside roads come to my mind . I do not like snow too. It is really scary to drive on icy roads.
The way I take care of my health in winter
is I park my car further from my work.
Although it is cold I try to walk little bit because I always drive so I rarely walk .
During warmer seasons I ride my bike to work for exercise but it is so cold that I can't .
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