Channy
Merry Christmas Yesterday night is Christmas Eve.My classmates and I played games with our foreign teacher.He dressed like a Father Christmas . Next,my good friends and I had a heart-to-heart talk in the playground. Finally,my rootmates and I ate apples at the domitory.
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Merry Christmas

Yesterday Last night is was [1] Christmas Eve.  [2] My classmates and I played games with our foreign teacher.  He dressed like a Father Christmas .
Next, my good friends and I had a heart-to-heart talk in the playground.
Finally, my roommates and I ate apples at in the dormitory.

 

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[1] Because yesterday is in the past, you must use the past tense.

[2] When writing English, you must add a space (' ') after every comma (',') and full stop ('.').

 

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圣诞节快乐!

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haha~Merry Christmas
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Well. Merry Christmas
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