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<<The world smiled at her>> She was lost in her past. Her look was just empty. Nothing left to say. A sudden movement of an indiscreet person woke up her. She realize the reality. Her reality from time ago. A reality that not everyone would like to share. Depressed for the conscious moments she was passing though, she takes a time to walk and think. She passed next to an auditorium. Gates closed but still she can hear the applauses. Time will never come back.

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<<The world smiled at her>>

She was lost in her past. Her look was just empty. Nothing left to say. A sudden movement of an indiscreet person woke up her up. She realized the reality. Her reality from a time ago. A reality that not everyone would like to share. Depressed for the conscious moments she was passing though, she takes a took time to walk and think. She passed next to an auditorium. Gates closed but still she could can hear the applauses. Time will never come back.

 

[nice writing!]

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