Phyllis
let's finish it. Today I send my frist novel to publisher. No matter the result is what. I'm ready to write the second novel. And it will be my frist novel's sequel. Now is Taiwan's winter vacation. I can use almost a month to write a novel. The second novel is talk about people's dream. And it also has science fiction,dystopia. I hope the publisher will likes my novel.
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let's finish it.

Today I send my first novel to a publisher. No matter what the result is, what I'm ready to write the second novel - and it will be my first novel's sequel. Now it is Taiwan's winter vacation. I can use have/can spend almost a month to writing a novel. The second novel is will talk be about people's dreams, and <em>(way too many conjunctions starting new sentences!)</em> it also has science fiction, dystopia. I hope the publisher will likes my novel.

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