Corrected Version:
Musical Concerts
in this exactly moment Right now, I am watching on tv The Foo Fighters concert in Rio de Janeiro on TV, and I was thinking about if the a style of music has the ablility to influence people to learn another language. Yes, I know that music is an important motive to do make someone to learn, and to study another language, but and the what kind music has this influence? I met an American guy and he who told me that he became interested to in learning Portuguese after he listened to "Bossa Nova" and "MPB". So, if you are reading this text, what do you think about this?
Clean Version:
Musical Concerts
Right now, I am watching The Foo Fighters concert in Rio de Janerio on TV, and I was thinking about if a style of music has the ability to influence people to learn another langauge. Yes, I know that music is an important motive to make someone learn and to study another language, but what kind of music has this influence? I met an American guy who told me that he became interested in learning Portuguese after he listened to "Bossa Nova" and "MPB". So, if you are reading this text, what do you think about this?
Great job Juliana!