Working from home I have the opportunity to work from home, sometimes is great but sometimes is not. People think that working from home is always great and some people dream about it, however there a

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Working from home I have the opportunity to work from home, sometimes is great but sometimes is not. People think that working from home is always great and some people dream about it, however there are many distractions at home, you really need to get focus on your work, otherwise the times goes and you are not going to be able to finish your tasks on time. I love to play video games and to watch movies, and sometimes is really hard to focus on the work because of that. In order to work from home you need to be a very responsible person, you also need to deliver your assignments on time, but overall you need to be professional. In the image below "Robotin" is taking my workspace and he doesn't allows me to work anymore xD

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Working from home

I have the opportunity to work from home, sometimes it is great but sometimes it's not. People think that working from home is always great and some people dream about it. However there are many distractions at home, you really need to be/stay focused on your work, otherwise the times goes and you are not going to be able to finish your tasks on time.

I love to play video games and to watch movies, and sometimes it is really hard to focus on the work because of that. In order to work from home you need to be a very responsible person, you also need to deliver your assignments on time, but overall/most of all you need to be professional.

In the image below "Robotin" is taking my workspace and he doesn't allows me to work anymore xD

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Working from home

I have the opportunity to work from home. Sometimes it is great, but sometimes it is not. People think that working from home is always great and some people dream about it. However there are many distractions at home, when you really need to get focus on your work. Otherwise the times goes and you are not going to be able to finish your tasks on time.

I love to play video games and to watch movies, and sometimes it is really hard to focus on the work because of that. In order to work from home you need to be a very responsible person, you also need to deliver your assignments on time, but overall you need to be professional.

In the image below "Robotin" is taking my workspace and he doesn't allows me to work anymore xD

Good job! You might want to try shorter sentences. Some of the original sentences would be considered run-on sentences, so that is why I broke them up a bit. This entry made me laugh, I also work from home and sometimes my distraction is this website. :)

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I'm an online English teacher and I've been working for an outsourcing company for two years now. Our offices are quite small, as a result I get easily distracted by the traffic noises and other teachers' voices in the background. So, my job became rather challenging and frustrating. Last month, I finally decided to quit and work from home. I agree with you: "There are many distractions at home. In order to work from home you need to be a very responsible person...but most of all you need to be professional". My family, and friends, even beggars unexpectedly knock on my door demanding my attention. The most challenging thing about working from home is being your own boss-which requires great discipline. Unlike my previous job, I am responsible for technical problems and other unforeseeable events such as power cuts. Although, I have to be honest and say, working from home is very comfortable and my schedule is really flexible. This gives me the opportunity to enjoy my hobbies and spend time with my extremely cute pets.

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