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I Want To Have a Long Vacation My little baby is only six months now. During the last semester, my mother-in-law helped me in my home so I can go to work. The new semester will begin but no one is able to help me. So, I want a long vacation to stay at home and take care of my baby. Wish that the headmaster is good-hearted enough to allow me.
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I Want To Have a Long Vacation

My little baby is only six months old now. During the last semester, my mother-in-law helped me in my home so I can could go to work.
The new semester will begin but no one is able to help me. So, I want a long vacation to stay at home and take care of my baby. I wish that the headmaster is good-hearted enough to allow me to stay home.

 

Instead of "Wish" I would use "I hope".

 

Good Luck.

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No. I'm a teacher.
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Hope ur headmaster will be good-hearted enough. r u still a student?
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