Anting old town Tangyuan
Do you know Chinese Tangyuan? It's a kind of delicious food in China Chinese delicacy, . And it is also called known as rice balls or dumpling balls. There are many tastes flavors of Tangyuan, such as bean paste, black sesame, peanut and salt, and so on. I almost only accept prefer black sesame.
Today is On rainy Saturdays, rainy. I still when I have to work, . I'm a SAP consultant. I keptp working until half past eight p.m. I'm hardworking and crazy to work. After work, I ride back home.
On my way back home, I like visiting my favorite there is a good-look shop named Anting old town Tangyuan, after I leave work. This shop which has various kinds of dumplings. Then I ate A bowl of small wonton with pork is It's warm and tasty. I like this this deep comforting night food on a cold winter night, and I like this good shop. The taste of this delicious food makes working on a weekend well, worth it.
Jack:
This story is about your past experience eating this delicious food. Therefore, you should not switch from past tense (过去式) to present tense (现在时)。 This is why I removed the parts about the kind of job you have now. Your job is not important to the story but the fact that you work on a Saturday is important.