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my dream life i am a girl who always dream of future . so the people around me think i am innocence . i ever just dreaming and do nothing . but now i realize that i must do truely things meanwhile dream my perfect life . so i want to improve my english during a short time and let me more outgoing .so i am glad you can make friends with me . thanks for your help on my composition~ i believe we can get a perfect life!fighting for dream!
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My dream life

I am a girl who always dreams of the futureso the people around me think I am innocentce .
I ever sometimes just dreaming and do nothingbut now I realize that I must do truely things take some action meanwhile dreaming of my perfect life. 
so That is why I want to improve my English during a short period of time and let me become more outgoing. I would be am glad if you can will make friends with me .
Thanks for your help on my composition (text/entry)~
I believe we can get a perfect life! Fighting for a dream!

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The ”I” pronoun in English is written in capital letter at all times. 

”Innocent” is the adjective, ”innocence” is the noun.
 

You are welcome! Good luck with your studies! 

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