Edward Malone
Alone at a lake. Continue Continuing to walk along the coast he continued to thin... "We go to the movies, that we are watching a film. While we are watching TV, we are watching. If we Surf the internet, we watch... We go to museum, to stadium, to theatre, that.....Absolutely right! To watch! Even when we are walking, we are watching. Everywhere this is "watch". If it is really... Well... But..... If so... Tell me, please, when we do? How much "I watch" is in our life? And how much is "I do"?"
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Alone at a lake. Continue

Continuing to walk along the coast he continued to thin*...
"We go to the movies, that* we are watching a film. While we are watching TV, we are watching. If we Surf the internet, we watch... We go to *museum, to *stadium, to *theatre, that.....Absolutely right! To watch! Even when we are walking, we are watching. Everywhere *this is "watch". If it is really... Well... But..... If so... Tell me, please, when we do?* How much "I watch" is in our life? And how much is "I do"?"

 

'thin' : think

'that* we are watching a film' : omit

*a museum;  the stadium;  the theatre

*this is "watch" : it is "watch"

'when we do?' :  need to emphasize 'do', perhaps italics [cannot use here], or capital letters.

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