Coco Liu
Chinese puer tea with rose in it , the flower smell together with the puer tea that make the tea  widely accepted especially by women, as we know the rose also have the cosmetic effect , if u insist on drinking it several year ,u will lokks younger and more beauty than who donnot have the habit of drinking puer tea
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Chinese puer tea

with rose in it , the flower smell together with the puer tea that make the tea  widely accepted especially by women, as we know the rose also have the cosmetic effect , if u insist on drinking it several year ,u will lokks younger and more beauty than who donnot have the habit of drinking puer tea

 

Chinese Puer Tea with Rose

 

The Rose flower smell together with Puer tea makes this tea popular especially with women, as we know that rose also has a cosmetic effect. If you have the habit of drinking it for several years, you will look younger and be more beautiful than those who did not drink this tea.

 

Hi hope this helps. I just changed some words to make it sound more natural. Otherwise good work.

you - u both are fine and understood but "u" is very casual. Hope this helps.

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