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Михаил
English speaking doctor in Kiev. Once i decided to know if there some english speaking doctors are in Kiev. Searching in the internet showed almost nothing. This situation needs changing. Why don't I start to change it?
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An English speaking doctor in Kiev.

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At one time, I decided to find out (or see) if there were some (better>any) English speaking doctors in Kiev. Searching on the internet (or just "searchin the internet"), I found almost none (better>hardly any) (I did not find any?). This situation needs changing. Why don't I start to change it (better>that)?

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Выделяю ошибки красным, а стилистику синим.

 

English Speaking-Doctors in Kiev

I once decided to find out if there were some English-speaking doctors are in Kiev. Searching in the internet showed almost nothing. This situation needs changing. Why don't I start to change it?

 

Вариант:  Searching on the internet showed.....

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English speaking doctor in Kiev.

I wanted to know if there were English speaking doctors are in Kiev. Searching   the internet showed almost nothing. This situation needs changing. Why don't I start to change it?

 

Excellent idea Micheal.

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Thank a lot! So many mistakes in such a short message . I am a little embarrassed:-).but if I don,t ask I won't be fluent speaker!
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