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The meaning of family to me Family is a single word, but it has a lot of meanings. Some people say it is pain and anger while others say it is happiness, and honesty. To me, family is the most glamorous thing in the world. It's like the angel who god send down to protect me, to guide me out of the darkness.Moreover, family means a lot more than just a bond of blood relatives and responsibility. It means the people who accept you no matter who you are without any hatred or judgement. Futher, the love of family is infinite and unconditional. Father and mother bring you up, teach you how to walk, how to speak and how to love . They take us under their wing and protect us.Additionally, family is also the place where you can feel safe and serene. However hard and severe the real life is, family is always stand by you, encourage you, give you a strength to withstand any challenges.Having a family is a greatest blessing in the world. All in all, I can say that everybody can leave but family is permanent.
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The Meaning of Family to Me

Family is a single word, but it has a lot of meanings. Some people say it is their family is pain bothersome and anger antagonizing, while others say it their family is happy and honest. To me In my own opinion, family is the most glamorous (instead of glamorous, you can use "wonderful") thing in the world. It's My family is like the an angel who god God send sent down from heaven to protect me, to and guide me out of the away from darkness. Moreover, family means a lot much more than just a bond of blood relatives and responsibility. It means, but the people who accept you no matter who you are, without any hatred or judgement. Futhermore, the love of that comes from one's own family is infinite and unconditional. Father and mother bring you up, teach you how to walk, how to speak and how to love. They take us under their wing and protect us. Additionally, family is also the place where whenever you are with your family, you can feel safe and serene. However, hard and severe the real life is, one's family is always standing by you, encouraging you, and giving you a the strength to withstand any challenges. Having a family is a the greatest blessing one can receieve in the world. All in all, I can say that although everybody can may leave you, but family is permanent.

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The Meaning of Family to Me

Family is a simple (single) word (,) but (itcan evoke a myriad of feelings, (has a lot of meanings.) for some it is a reminder of (people say it is) pain and anger whilst for (while) others it represents (say it is) happiness (,) and honesty. For (To) me, family is the most glamorous thing in the world, as if (. It's like) angels sent from God (the angel who god send down) to protect me, to guide me out of the darkness.Moreover, family means a whole lot more than just a bond of blood relatives with (and) responsibility for each other. It stands for (means) the people who accept you through thick and thin, come what may, (no matter who you are) without (any) hatred or prejudice. (judgement.) What is more, (Futher,) the love of a family is infinite and unconditional. Father and mother bring you up, teach you how to walk, how to speak and how to love . They take us under their wings and protect us, so we (. Additionally, family is also the place where you) can feel safe and secure. (serene.) However harshly life may treat you, (hard and severe the real life is,) family will (is) always stand by you, encourage you, give you the (a) strength to withstand any challenge(s). Having a family to turn to is a blessing and so reassuring. (a greatest blessing in the world.) Whilst friends may be transient, (All in all, I can say that everybody can leave but) family is permanent.

 

Nicely written article with well-expressed emotions. I have suggested including a few more native expressions so as to add a little more colour to the artcile   

 

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