Pinky’s Life, My Yorkshire Terrier - Part IV

When Pinky was eight (luckily* he didn't look his age) he had (started to) become a glutton. Like all old people, he liked cakes. One day he stole chocolate that was on the little table, but I have caught [pursued] him and I took/got back from him the chocolate that he had wanted to eat.

My dog has had a very interesting [animated] life, so...

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In PART V you can see Pinky's picture

*fortunately

Pinky’s Life, My Yorkshire Terrier - Part IV

By the time Pinky was eight (luckily he didn't look his age), he had started to become a glutton. Like all old people, he liked cakes. One day, he stole some chocolate that was on the coffee table but I chased him down and I took the chocolate that he wanted to eat.

My dog has had a very interesting life, so...

Don't miss Part V...coming soon

In PART V you can see Pinky's picture

Good work! I made some changes to allow for the grammar tenses you wanted to use. Unfortunately, it's impossible to use present perfect in this context.

Pinky’s Life, My Yorkshire Terrier - Part IV

When Pinky was eight (luckily he didn't look his age) he had started to become a glutton. Like all old people he liked cakes. One day he stole chocolate that was on the little table, but I pursued him and I took the chocolate that he wanted to eat.

My dog has had a very animated life, so...

Don't miss Part V...coming soon

In PART V you can see Pinky's picture